Manuscript & Screenplay Review +6 Hours of Personalized Strategy Session
Partner with a Pro to Write the Best Story You're Capable of Producing
Do NOT waste your chance to impress agents, acquiring editors, and producers. Have a professional writer review your work first and strategize with you on how to make it as good as it can be.
Novels
Non-fiction & Memoirs
Stage Plays
Screenplays & TV Pilots, including TV Series Bibles
They don't call it a "life's work" or a "masterpiece" for nothing. You've spent a long time on your writing.
It's taken months, perhaps years to gestate ... untold hours spent doing the work.
But remember that no one succeeds alone.
The Beatles had producer George Martin on their side.
Walt Disney had his older brother, Roy.
Albert Einstein had Max Talmud.
Oprah Winfrey had Jeffrey D. Jacobs.
This list goes on and on and on.
Give yourself the mentor you've always dreamed of.
Once you've processed your manuscript report, work one-on-one with Damon DiMarco for six hours to cement your understanding of what your story will benefit from ... and how best to implement it.
“Relentlessly insightful. Respectful and inspirational. Damon's fierce commitment to offering clear responses regarding what works and doesn't work in a story avoids cheap comparisons while always honoring the writer's intent. The guidance he's provided helped stories by great writers like National Book Award winner Denis Johnson, Pulitzer Prize winner M. Scott Momaday, off-Broadway history makers Jack Heifner, Bridgette Wimberly, and James McLure, playwright and TV writer Cassandra Medley, and many dozens more to flourish. ”
“Damon is top notch and I am very thankful to be working with him. I couldn't have done this without him.”
“Damon’s approach to growing your story to maturity is unique and simple. He is very patient and professional and will put your journey on the right road. Set a date to start with him now!”
“I could never have written my novel without what Damon taught me. I had tried to write books by myself before but always ended up quitting halfway through. With Damon’s technique for developing and locking down structure, the writing became easy and fast. Learning what he taught me saved me years, I think, of false starts, ruined stories, and quite a few headaches! ”
“I’d struggled to break my screenplay for years. Took classes at NYU, UCLA … read every book. Draft after draft. Year after year. Still, it just wasn’t working. Literally, in the first session with Damon, we got to the bottom of it, solved my (now obvious) problem and I was finally off to the races. Cannot recommend him or his writing courses enough. He’s got a gift! ”
Are you stuck writing your novel, screenplay, or stage play? Would you love to work with an experienced writing pro who will show you step-by-step how to build your story and get it ready to write in six lessons? Sign up for Break Your Story!
$89.99
Are you stuck writing your novel, screenplay, or stage play? Would you love to work with a writing pro who will show you step-by-step how to build your story and get it ready to write in six-weeks? Sign up for the Six-Week Story Support Workshop!
$845
Once you've taken the Break Your Story online writer's course, follow up with a one-hour, one-on-one consultation with Damon.
$95
Once you've taken the Break Your Story online writer's course, follow up with a one-hour, one-on-one consultation with Damon.
$375
Are you a writer who's finished your latest manuscript or screenplay? Do you want an award-winning professional writer to go over it and recommend what might make it better, and more saleable? If so, you've come to the right place.
$1,450
Are you stuck writing your novel, screenplay, or stage play? Would you love to work with an experienced writing pro who will show you step-by-step how to build your story and get it ready to write in six lessons? Sign up for Break Your Story!
$1,700
Best-selling author, Damon DiMarco
Let's get your novel, screenplay, or stage play in the best shape it can be!